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posted on Apr, 8 2014 @ 03:42 PM
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Please ignore this thread. the last time I checked we had to have permission to post in this section.

Now that I know I can I will post here.

edit on 8-4-2014 by MentorsRiddle because: (no reason given)




posted on Apr, 8 2014 @ 03:47 PM
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Not a bad story. decent plot, but low character development.
I like how it starts out with the please ignore stuff..obviously a play on how society is becoming an invisible thing with the advent of the digital age.
The arc where the main character realizing his limitations were simply an illusion was a nice twist.

7/10



posted on Apr, 8 2014 @ 03:54 PM
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SaturnFX
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Not a bad story. decent plot, but low character development.
I like how it starts out with the please ignore stuff..obviously a play on how society is becoming an invisible thing with the advent of the digital age.
The arc where the main character realizing his limitations were simply an illusion was a nice twist.

7/10


^ This is art. ^



posted on Apr, 8 2014 @ 04:01 PM
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I took it as more of a modern day morality play...



posted on Apr, 8 2014 @ 04:04 PM
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A short story should be more than two sentences. I could be wrong though.



posted on Apr, 8 2014 @ 04:06 PM
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rickymouse
A short story should be more than two sentences. I could be wrong though.


My daughter won't stop crying and screaming in the middle of the night.
I visited her grave and ask her to stop, but it doesn't help.



2 sentences, gave ya chills..didn't it.



posted on Apr, 8 2014 @ 04:17 PM
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EEE...Yah, now that was an eerie short story. Gees, I guess some short stories may come out of this thread.





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