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Fallen Angel

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posted on Apr, 4 2014 @ 06:55 AM
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He slides his hand slowly onto my shoulder.
My heart drops into the pit of my stomach.
I felt who he really was.
He gently turns me around and lifts my chin.
He looks directly into my blue eyes.
His eyes are absolutely mesmerizing.
There's evil lurking behind them though.
I feel it, I see it, and I'm entranced by his emerald eyes.
He slowly begins to move his mouth.
His voice is powerful and deep.
He tells me darkness lurks within.
Always has and I can't push it away any longer.
I can't escape my destiny and who I really am.
I am a fallen angel punished to reside in this vessel.
I am here to help destroy mankind.
They are weak, fearful, greedy beings.
Now that I know who I am...I shall start to smite them.

Thanks for reading.
I was making this into a short story but I got stumped and it turned out like this. Hope you enjoy.
-nat
edit on 4-4-2014 by natalia because: (no reason given)




posted on Apr, 4 2014 @ 07:52 AM
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I am here to help destroy mankind. 
They are weak, fearful, greedy beings. 
Now that I know who I am...I shall start to smite them. 


I am here to help wake up mankind.
They are weak, fearful, greedy beings.
Now that I know who I am...I shall start to try and save them because I believe hope is not lost.



posted on Apr, 4 2014 @ 07:52 AM
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interesting.
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For some reason I think a little System Of A Down - Chop Suey would fit in.




posted on Apr, 4 2014 @ 01:02 PM
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jazz10
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I am here to help destroy mankind. 
They are weak, fearful, greedy beings. 
Now that I know who I am...I shall start to smite them. 


I am here to help wake up mankind.
They are weak, fearful, greedy beings.
Now that I know who I am...I shall start to try and save them because I believe hope is not lost.


I'm diggin what you wrote... And sure..I would like to help... But darkness lurks within...
Thanks for reading



posted on Apr, 4 2014 @ 01:03 PM
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Fine by me
that song is great.
Thanks for reading and adding a song



posted on Apr, 4 2014 @ 03:27 PM
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Another piece of darkness from within. Better out onto pen and paper than fizzing inside oneself. Nice stuff as usual



posted on Apr, 5 2014 @ 09:18 AM
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Thanks doc.
Me and my gal pal were chattin the other day and she said that when I write my dark poetry it's like I am releasing it from me.. So yes..better writing darkness than keeping darkness in...



posted on Apr, 7 2014 @ 07:57 PM
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The good in us is made stronger every time we expose the darkness within us. The darkness cannot survive in the light. When we expose those things and our friends understand and still love us and still respect us, the darkness loses it's hold on us.
You are a precious spirit and your friends know it.

Hugs,
grayeagle



posted on Apr, 14 2014 @ 11:34 AM
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Truly inspiring words my friend.
Thank you
Peace and hugs to you



posted on Apr, 14 2014 @ 12:34 PM
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grayeagle
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The good in us is made stronger every time we expose the darkness within us. The darkness cannot survive in the light. When we expose those things and our friends understand and still love us and still respect us, the darkness loses it's hold on us.
You are a precious spirit and your friends know it.

Hugs,
grayeagle


A profound statement Grayeagle!
Truly loved this Natalia. Spring is the best time to purge all the darkness inside and make room for summer light!




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