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Is this a Haiku? I think it's a Haiku.

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posted on Mar, 30 2014 @ 01:02 AM
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My god femininity,
personal aspect my dearest.
#, I am faithless.

That attempt at potentially artistic expression aside… Ugh, who writes haiku's? Brought to you by! Life and good scotch!




posted on Mar, 30 2014 @ 01:12 AM
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A haiku is 5 7 5
First line 5 syllables
2nd line 7 syllables
3rd line 5 syllables
Like this....

I like ATS
It's where I get my news from
Not from MSM

Hope that helps



posted on Mar, 30 2014 @ 01:12 AM
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I am not certain.
Words are endless streams flowing.
Flatulence denied.



posted on Mar, 30 2014 @ 01:19 AM
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I have never understood the mystery of the Haiku. I don't know why it's even done.


I also don't know if you got it right or not.

If you did... Great Job! If you didn't... you suck. I don't think you were really even trying.




posted on Mar, 30 2014 @ 01:20 AM
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Our president sucks
He tells lies almost daily
He should be removed



posted on Mar, 30 2014 @ 01:25 AM
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JHumm
Our president sucks
He tells lies almost daily
He should be removed


Could not agree more
Birth Certificate has holes
Let's invade Russia



posted on Mar, 30 2014 @ 01:27 AM
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Ha, words. 5, 7, 5.

Too drunk to properly haiku a reply, it was a haiku! Damn censorship.

edit on 30-3-2014 by Strayed because: (no reason given)



posted on Mar, 30 2014 @ 02:12 AM
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It is not Haiku!

You are mistaken about it!

Try rhyming instead!



posted on Mar, 30 2014 @ 02:24 AM
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Anybody else besides me clapping their hands mentally (like school taught us) while reading these?



posted on Mar, 30 2014 @ 02:31 AM
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You've inspired me to post my own Haiku thread.
Thanks for the creative jolt!



posted on Mar, 30 2014 @ 02:43 AM
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Whats the first US company that bragged about its haiku phrase being haiku??



posted on Mar, 30 2014 @ 02:44 AM
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Kangaruex4Ewe
Anybody else besides me clapping their hands mentally (like school taught us) while reading these?



I am doing it too ,counting syllibals on my fingers while reading and writing mine too .


This is a haiku
It makes you count while you write
Don't understand why



posted on Mar, 30 2014 @ 02:49 AM
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JHumm

Kangaruex4Ewe
Anybody else besides me clapping their hands mentally (like school taught us) while reading these?



I am doing it too ,counting syllibals on my fingers while reading and writing mine too .


This is a haiku
It makes you count while you write
Don't understand why


Glad it's not just me
That hears clapping inside my
Head sounds like cymbals

The peer pressure was too much. I had to give it a go.



posted on Mar, 30 2014 @ 03:43 AM
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Tsunami

Like a dream I wake
As a rouge wave I destroy
Sleep man and not take
edit on 30-3-2014 by AprilFooseball because: (no reason given)



posted on Mar, 30 2014 @ 03:49 AM
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An Alien Haiku:

Derpa derpa derp
derpa derpa derpa derp
derpa derpa derp



posted on Mar, 30 2014 @ 05:59 AM
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Give me liberty
There is no alternative
Or I will take it



posted on Apr, 1 2014 @ 07:33 PM
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Strayed
My god femininity,
personal aspect my dearest.
#, I am faithless.

That attempt at potentially artistic expression aside… Ugh, who writes haiku's? Brought to you by! Life and good scotch!


Haiku is an acquired taste as is most art that doesn't come from the networks or cable.



www.abovetopsecret.com...



posted on Apr, 1 2014 @ 09:11 PM
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fog of negativity
sitting in silence
waiting on a lie




posted on Apr, 2 2014 @ 06:44 AM
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JHumm
A haiku is 5 7 5
First line 5 syllables
2nd line 7 syllables
3rd line 5 syllables
Like this....

I like ATS
It's where I get my news from
Not from MSM

Hope that helps


Ha, I knew it was supposed to be 5, 7, 5 but I doubted my drunk perception and if I missed something in the definition. I appreciate your help though and your example.



posted on Apr, 2 2014 @ 06:46 AM
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Kangaruex4Ewe
I have never understood the mystery of the Haiku. I don't know why it's even done.


I also don't know if you got it right or not.

If you did... Great Job! If you didn't... you suck. I don't think you were really even trying.



Challenge in expression is my guess, thanks for the "great job" and the "you suck" either way.




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