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posted on Mar, 24 2014 @ 08:59 AM
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Blood blurs my eyes
My skin falls off
I'm already dead
I can't fix this
I lay down
One with earth
Can't move
Standing on me
Imagined it this way
I accept
I don't fight
I'm already dead

-nat




posted on Mar, 24 2014 @ 09:17 AM
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"Oh let the sun beat down upon my face, stars to fill my dream. I am a traveler of both time and space, to be where I have been."

~Oceans Twelve



posted on Mar, 24 2014 @ 01:44 PM
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Good one Nat!

I haven't read anything from you in some time. Maybe I've just been missing them. Very deep piece you have here. With my penchant for dark poetry, this one lurks right down my alley.




posted on Mar, 24 2014 @ 03:49 PM
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A really dark piece madam!
.. A very good piece though. Your in the mood today arnt ya



posted on Mar, 25 2014 @ 08:14 AM
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Thanks for commenting friends.
I wrote this piece ... May 14, 2013. Wow that was sure awhile ago. I just never shared it. I changed the words a bit yesterday as well.
Dark thoughts follow me but I haven't been putting pen to paper ... I will soon I'm sure.

Thanks for reading xx
-nat



posted on Mar, 25 2014 @ 09:27 AM
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Hi Nat , this one is deep and dark , this has been on my mind a bit
. I just read a sad story . Gonna post. 1%



posted on Mar, 27 2014 @ 03:20 AM
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You're a very good writer!

I like the poem a lot=)





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